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| Author: | aracanid [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 6:24 pm ] |
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--Final Drop-- By Aracanid This is my story which finally has a name. I created a new thread because I dislike the amount of writing in the thread, as well as the fact it has 2 sub stories. After a while of no writing I have finally got to finish chapter 6 and will continue to write more chapters. You do not have to register to veiw the story but to reviw or take part in competitions I may have you gotta make an account. Anyway here is the link to the book. Simply click on the chapter you want to read, and when finished a chapter there is a next chapter button at the top of the page. Enjoy. ---Link: Currently on chapter 6: |
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| Author: | Orindell [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 8:58 pm ] |
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OK....The spacing is really crap and its a little late to be writing new Chapters. |
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| Author: | aracanid [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:26 pm ] |
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since when is it too late, I stopped because of exams and I have a 3 day break before they start again. Anyway its my story I can write it when i want. After all I did start this whole writing craze. |
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| Author: | Orindell [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:35 pm ] |
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Fine but what about the way that the spaceing is really crap??? |
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| Author: | aracanid [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:38 pm ] |
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blame bebo.com I didnt make the website, it seems to make the text very small. |
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| Author: | Orindell [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:42 pm ] |
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No! I mean the way that...Oh just look here: The thuds got louder and closer. Clanking and screeching of gears could be heard from every tunnel. I knew he had to do it, because if they managed to follow us they would find the brain. Then what would the UPB do? They wouldn't be able to stop their advance. The El-Tee and a few other men wearing heavy armor started planting charges at key points near each door. I stood their in a daze, wondering how they could send themselves to their own death. See?The paragraph ends Before the sentence. |
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| Author: | aracanid [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 9:46 pm ] |
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EWW! I never noticed that. WTF! Anyway I fixed it, musta done that after I posted it cause I sure as hell dont press enter in the middle of a sentance. Sorry about that orindell. |
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| Author: | Orindell [ Mon Jun 04, 2007 10:05 pm ] |
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It does not matter.Still a great story! |
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