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Author:  AlphaCommando [ Tue May 08, 2007 7:39 pm ]
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As you all know there have been a large number of fan fiction stories floating around, and that inspired me to make one too. My story takes place during a massive war between 3 factions; The Alquarius: They use fewer numbers but very expensive armor, robots, and equipment and want to form a pure Republic replacing the current form of goverment (this is the side of the squads story, ill explain later). The S.I.C. (Socalist Invasion Collective): They use crap loads of cheap infantry and relativly primitive gear. And the Royal Defence Army, which was/is the former Monarchy type goverment that the other two want to remove, they use less advenced weapons but lay down non-robotic infantry with redicluious firepower (they use lots of Atreanic Corp. clones). This is where you guys come in, the main characters are me and you guys who are part of an elite squad of infantry in the Alquarius army, as a shock trooper group who has a greater degree of independence than the normal trooper. My character is a clone who after grevious injury had his brain put in a modified Crobo MK.3 nicknamed Alpha, and is the Captain in charge of the squad. This story is gonna have refrences to almost any mod you can imagine (or I have access to). If you want a part in the story post name you want, your body (no green or blue clones, or "normal" robots, and be creative; anything from HKs to Cyborg ninjas), perfered weapon (no "normal" SMG or AK-47), and you general personalilty. The first 8 truly creative and serious people to post we be accepted, and ill put your name up here. Also any body or weapon must be from a mod or whatever so I can get a frame of refrence as to abilities.

::: Current Squad :::
Alpha; Crobo MK.3: Leader, Captain
Dauss; Crobo MK.3: CQC, First Lieutenant
Orindell; Crobo MK. 2: Demilotions, First Sergeant
Exalion; Crobo MK. 2: Air Assault, Specialist
3 Solid; S-3 Drone, Trooper, Specialist
Empyreal; Droptrooper: Spec Ops, Specialist
Kaos; ODST :D: Assasin, Specialist
Zalo; Giant Clone: Trooper, Specialist.
Junkie; Himself? :-( : Sniper, Specialist
324453(Serial); Armored Clone: Trooper, Specialist
Holy Mombasa; Spartan, Trooper: Specialist
Aracanid; Heavy Clone: CQC, Specialist


.....Whoo that was long :-P , but this is gonna be fun.
Author:  Orindell [ Tue May 08, 2007 8:29 pm ]
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Orindell

Crobo Mrk 2.

Demolitions expert.

He is quick to anger.It is hard to befriend him but when you do he is your friend for life.

LTM1A's and the Crobo shotgun.

Thats it!Wadda ya think?
Author:  Dauss [ Tue May 08, 2007 8:56 pm ]
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Dauss.

Crobo Mk. 3

CQC, Special Ops.

A well planned thinker, often seen scouting out an area prior to operations.

Open to suggestion, and easily befriended. But not very paitent when ideas are ignored, or when allies go against me.

EDIT: Forgot my weapons.

Burst cannon: A shotgun type weapon, essentially a stick with a battery attached. Once the trigger ispulled, a large mass of energy erupts form the end in a shotgun type action.

Infact, just think energy shotgun, with a large mass of energy from up front.

And a Scoped, silenced assualt rifle, easily modified to attach a grenade launcher. Fires .45s, often used as a sniper weapon, or storm rifle.

And the occasional blade or brick of explosive.

And here's a picture of the burst cannon.

You get the idea.
Author:  AlphaCommando [ Tue May 08, 2007 9:25 pm ]
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Ok great guys, you've been addad. You guys and me are the vangurd and pretty much the squads bullet sheilds (also Dauss due to your being a Crobo and your characters well-planedness :-( your my second in command), but not to worry the armor is molecularly bonded lithanium and resestiant to even AK type rounds. Now all we need are some humans.... and some other jobs especially a sniper (a Hunter Killer sniper would be cool :smile: )
Author:  Orindell [ Tue May 08, 2007 9:43 pm ]
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Oh yea and my guys Crobo gun comes with custom grenade laucher underneath!Cool eh?
Author:  AlphaCommando [ Tue May 08, 2007 9:52 pm ]
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Cool, how about it can fire those wall breachers that Punisher made.

Come on people I need more applicants, cant get the story started without them!
Author:  Empyreal [ Tue May 08, 2007 11:34 pm ]
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Empyreal.

Droptrooper.

Special Ops, Tech Expert, Weapon Theorist.

An intelligent quick thinker that adapts well, and may rush into a situation without considering the consquences first.

Friendly and helpful, but when he gets angry, don't get in his way. He has a great respect for life, even if it's robotic, and will do anything to save someone.

Weapons:

Empyreal is a unique weapons specialist.

Dark Matter Globule Cannon (DMGC)

The DMGC fires a single blob of dark matter which explodes on impact into smaller globs which reflect off of the surface the original glob hit.

Exponential Kinetic Amplification Device (EKAD)

A prototype weapon that he is testing for Empyrical Laboratories, it can not pierce anything at all, and thus is useless in open areas. However, if fired into a small room, it bounces around, its speed multiplying with every bounce, demolishing anything in it.

Battle Taser

Another experimental weapon he's testing for Empyrical Laboratories. It kills Green Clones only if they're shot in the head, Blue Clones only if they're shot anywhere but the head, Robots if they're shot anywhere, and skeletons only if it's in the back of their neck, where the spinal cord is exposed. It has to be rewound before it can be used again, which makes it a useful grappling device.

Phaser

A pistol-like weapon, it can be fired for five seconds before it has to recharge. If the beam is held on an enemy, they start de-stabilizing, and if kept on for the full five seconds, they will die. Otherwise they'll be severely damaged.

Suprise, he's testing it for EL!

Multiplication Laser Rifle

EL seems to like to test their weapons in the field by giving the prototypes to soldiers. This is also an EL prototype. At close range, it only has one laser. However, after fifteen yards, it divides. Then after another 15, it divides again. It will continue this until they hit something.

WARNING: Due to its infinite nature, it is highly unsafe. Use with caution.
Author:  zalo [ Tue May 08, 2007 11:39 pm ]
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Zalo

Normal Soldier/Expert Scientist/Weapon Maker

Giant Clone

Liquid Flame Gun

No patience, great for guarding bases under heavy attack.
And chases skeletons when the action is dulled down.
Author:  AlphaCommando [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:08 am ]
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This is going along great, all I need now are a Sniper, Tech Expert, Comm Officer, and another trooper (nothing specific).
Author:  Empyreal [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:12 am ]
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I didn't know Tech Expert was an option. Edited that in also.
Author:  AlphaCommando [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:16 am ]
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So you just deal with all the tech and expermental tech in the squad? So I guess im down to needing a sniper, comm officer or pilot, and a "normal" infantry guy.
Author:  Nfsjunkie91 [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:37 am ]
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Nfsjunkie91

Nfsjunkie91 (search in mods)

Sniper

Steyr HS .50 and Colt SOCOM, Silenced, from my mod pack. The Steyr HS .50 will gib whatever it hits, and the SOCOM fires a .45 ACP bullet capable of completely penetrating flesh, it also comes with a silencer.
Author:  Empyreal [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:47 am ]
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AlphaCommando wrote:
So you just deal with all the tech and expermental tech in the squad? So I guess im down to needing a sniper, comm officer or pilot, and a "normal" infantry guy.


Also, I'm a weapon theorist, so for weapons I can combine, dissasemble, rewire, and so on. As the Tech Expert, I can do the same for other technology, as well as some hacking.

Also, I'm more for stealth than force.
Author:  AlphaCommando [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:50 am ]
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All right that just leaves 2 more guys (inspecific as to their jobs). also Nfsjunkie91 what kind of personality do you have??
Author:  Nfsjunkie91 [ Wed May 09, 2007 12:57 am ]
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I'm usually a joker, but when my friends start getting fired at, I grab my rifle and blast away.

Also, I'd like to add the RG-82 .357 from my mod to my inventory, can't go anywhere without my old painless!

Weapon info:
Colt SOCOM: Semi Automatic, silenced, 10 shots - 2 head shots, or 5 body shots kill.
Steyr HS .50: Bolt Action, very loud, 1 shot - instant kill.
RG 82 .357: Semi Automatic, loud, 6 shots - 2 head shots, or 3 body shots kill.
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