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Author:  Warguy [ Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:32 pm ]
Post subject:  Epic stories

STORIES MAY BE VERY LONG OR LAST 2-5 POSTS. NOT WHOLE PAGES.

Welcome to the Epic story thread! I'm Warguy, and I will be hosting this thread.

Rules: No god-modding (Like never getting hurt, etc.)
No using any weapons that aren't released yet (WIPs can be used too)
No cheating (Time travel, etc.)
No making time paradoxes (Going back in time and killing your grandfather, etc.)
No faggotry.

And now you're ready to start.

Author:  Joe [ Sat Jun 05, 2010 7:46 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: Epic stories

Ork invasion of Station #803-AOC from the point of view of a retreating Coalition clone:

"What the hell are those maniacal green monsters, and where the hell did they come from?" As I and my six squad mates ran at full speed toward the Space port/Train station, these two questions resonated in my half organic mind like the dying screams of the other 20 clones holding down the now overrun waystation from which we now flee. Crazy bastards, those green monsters; damn near impossible to kill, and they just scream "WAAAAGH!!!" when you shoot them. Some of them have ridiculously large guns, some have axes bigger than I am, and some have jetpacks with those axes. THAT'S scary.

As we run, we see hundreds of them falling from space in these flaming red tubes with fins. Most of them don't seem bothered with chasing us, the few that did got tired of us, or got smashed by more falling pods. Don't they have drop solutions? I'm glad they don't.

We continue running. The main station is clearly visible now. Some of the others start jetpackking in short jumps to speed things up. I start to fall a bit behind. Just before I hit the jump button, I see the two guys in front's alert signals go off, and I look up just in time to see a red transport tube graze one of the guys in front taking his arms and right leg off. He's down to 32 HP and losing fast. The red pod explodes, and two green creatures burst out of the wreckage yelling: "Green iz best!!!"

We open fire. The monster with the gun opens fire too. Three clones standing next to me explode from the impact of the excessively large bullets before I put ten rounds in the crazed monster's head with my Assault rifle. The one with the axe seems to be fighting the guys in front. The wounded clone still had two grenades in his inventory. He started up his jetpack. The monster with the axe had glee in his face as he readied his axe in "batting position". The monster screamed "WAAAAAGH!!!!", right before swinging his axe perfectly at the suicidal clone, splattering him and crushing the grenades, utterly destroying the monster.

I'm down to two squad mates, but we're almost there. The train was wrecked; priceless chunks of gold littered the ground, and one of the monsters lay dead underneath with a bazooka like contraption in his crushed arm. One of the squad mates, having only a pistol in his inventory, picked it up and reloaded. I'm quite surprised he was able to carry the damn thing. We jetpack up to the first level of the train station. Except for a few dead clones, the coast was clear. We headed up the stairs to the second level; same story, more dead bodies but no monsters. We were about to hit the third floor, when the clone with the bazooka got stuck. I ordered the other clone to report topside and wait for pickup, while I helped the other clone.

"Drop the damn bazooka!" I yelled at him, his AI must not have been fully formed, because he just repeatedly attempted to jetpack to the next floor with that goddamned hundred pound rocket launcher. I finally decided that this one wasn't worth the weight, and I left an active grenade right below him to keep him company. I jumped up to the third level.

I got to the third level. At either end of the hall was an active teleporter, probably leading to some overrun station. Overrun station. ACTIVE TELEPORTERS. The weight of my stupidity hit me full on when an axe toting monster came through, started running toward me, and hit me in the back taking my leg off. I was down to 73 HP and pissed. I emptied a mag into the bastard, but it was using it's axe as a shield. I think I stunned it, because as I reloaded, it just stood there. I decided not to piss it off any more, so I limped away and jumped to the top floor.

As I crawled through the broken door to the outside, I looked for my last squad mate, but there was no sign of him near the landing platform. I opened up the pie menu on my HUD to call the Evac rocket. I was promptly interrupted by the dead body of my last squad mate slamming into the ground underneath the massive body of a green monster. This one had an axe, and a Jetpack with that axe. Scary.

It bull-rushed me, jetpack flaring. I hit it in the head with five rounds before it jumped on me and chopped my gun in half. My alert signal was flashing violently above my head, in the same position as the monster's axe. As I braced for death, I heard one last "WAAAGH!!!" from the monster. As it's axe came down, I saw the contents of my five day tank-bred life flash before my eyes.

The monster disappeared. I heard a loud squishing sound below me, and my the console on my HUD flashed that there had been a "MOID Collision Error", whatever that means. As I stood up from the bloody mess of gore that was my adversary, I saw more red pods fall from the sky, but these were different. They were more conical, and they had "Blood Angels" written on them in black. My shuttle came. I got inside and sealed the hatches. As I was launched into space, I saw the battle below using the external cameras. Some big red guys were cutting through the monsters like butter. Damn I wish I had their guns...

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