Here's the main issues I'm seeing here:
Your main post is telling me that I need to make my own scene. That's a little odd - most people will come in here, see that, and instantly ignore it. If you've already fixed that, remove the notice from the first post, and if not, fix it.
The level itself is really not all that interesting. It's a flat piece of land with a flat cave. The idea is good (a piece of land and caves under it) but playing on it in CC isn't exciting at all. The main issue is that Cortex Command is a horizontally-scrolling shooter, meaning it often relies on the map for interesting vertical patterns. Since this map only really has 2 vertical levels, you end up with long lines of units shooting each other by accident, which doesn't make for very interesting gameplay. I would strongly suggest working some kind of cavern system into the underground portion of the map, and adding some hills on the top side. It seems like you're planning on the underground being the main attraction, so make it attractive.
Large amounts of sand in CC looks bad most of the time. You'll notice that almost every well-known map has very shallow sand, and only in patches. If the sand is deep or spans large areas, it usually has a custom texture. The reason is that the sand in CC is very white, and lacks depth in its texture. What ends up happening is that the top of your level is very hard to look at because of the sand's brightness. As well, since sand is a weak material, units will sink into it.
Lastly, every dirt section of your map has a little brown border around it. I can tell you're trying to imitate the vanilla CC maps, but you'll notice that in vanilla maps that border is always on top of the dirt and exposed to the air. The reason is that that line of dirt (called "Topsoil" by its material name) is what grass and plants grow on in-game. Underground it isn't of any use, nor is it of use under sand. I suggest you have some patches of grass up top (even if it's a desert, there's bound to be some vegetation) and replace the rest with normal dirt. Once again, the main reason is that it's a mushy material, but the other issue is that it looks a bit out of place next to other dirt textures when there's no plants in it.
Hopefully that's helpful. I know it's kind of a wall o' text, but give it a read anyway.
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. In the mean time though i'm working on my laptop, which can't connect to the internet and have already made two weapons;the MA5B and plasma sword.you'll hear from me in a few weeks. oh, did you know it is near hell typing on a Ds? it took me 3min to write 'near'